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Empirical Research

(c) Copyright 2002 by Wiseguy



It was one of those high-inertia nights. I'd been having a

lot of them lately: nights where I just sat in front of

the computer, aimlessly surfing, telling myself that

eventually I'd come up with an idea and start writing. Any

time now. Really.

The phone rang. It was a bit late in the evening for

telemarketers, so I went ahead and answered it. "Hello?"

"How many hypnotists does it take to change a light bulb?"

I chuckled. "Just one -- but it has to really want to

change. How are you, Carolyn?"

"I'm fine." Her voice was as smooth and sexy as ever.

"You've been keeping a very low profile; perhaps I should

be asking that question of you."

"I'm all right," I said. "Really."

"Are you?" I could hear the doubt in her voice. Carolyn

knows me too well. "We'll discuss that later. I was

actually calling to see if you'd be willing to come over

some time this week. An afternoon would be ideal, or after

work if necessary."

I thought for a minute. "I'm taking a half day off on

Wednesday to run some errands," I said. "I could come by

then. What's up?"

"A reporter from Online Life was here today," she

explained, "researching a piece on erotic hypnosis. When I

mentioned that I happen to know Wiseguy, she said that

she's a fan of your work, and did I think you'd be willing

to be interviewed for the article? It seemed like a good

idea to me, so I promised to try and arrange it."

"At your office?" I was missing something, I thought.

Carolyn's voice was nonchalant. "Why not? It's neutral

ground. You can be interviewed as Wiseguy, without

revealing your real name or particulars unless you decide

you want to. And it's been a long time since I've had you

on my couch, Mark. We might even do a little ...

demonstration."

My interest was piqued. Carolyn's hypnoerotic

demonstrations had inspired stories for me in the past; I'd

be a fool to pass up a chance to see another. And, I have

to admit, the idea of being interviewed for an online

magazine was flattering to my writer's ego. "Okay, I'm

game. What time should I be there?"

"I'll need to verify schedules," she hedged, "but why don't

you plan to come at three?"

"Okay," I said, then added jokingly, "but when should I

arrive?"

"Don't tempt me," she warned, laughing with me.

I hung up the phone shortly after with a tingle in my gut.

Carolyn was a professional hypnotherapist. I'd first

gotten to know her by her Internet name, under which she

had a thriving web site devoted to online hypnosis and

erotic stories. We'd met in person shortly after, when I

was researching a story, and become casual friends. She

made a great technical advisor, of course, and was easy to

talk to. What actual hypnosis experience I have came from

Carolyn putting me under in her office, usually to

demonstrate a suggestion or try out an idea, which often

ended up in a story. It was a mutually beneficial platonic

relationship.

Wednesday afternoon found me parking in the lot at

Carolyn's home, which had her office attached. She met me

at the door with a warm smile and a friendly hug. "Come

in, dear," she said, leading me to her office area. "I may

have told the reporter three thirty, so we can sit and talk

until she gets here."

That would explain the absence of unfamiliar vehicles in

front of the house, I thought dryly. Was it deliberate?

Carolyn sat in her therapy chair, a leather-bound armchair

flanked by end tables. In the drawers of those end tables,

I knew, were the various tools of her trade: fixation

objects, minidisk recorder and a supply of disks, notepad

and pencil, tissues, and a discreet little travel clock

whose face was visible only from that chair. I took a spot

on the far side of the victim couch, leaving the middle

position for our guest.

I had barely settled down when I became aware of Carolyn's

intense scrutiny. "You look haggard, Mark," she observed.

"Why don't you take a deep, slow breath, relax, and tell me

what's going on in your life?"

I didn't think I was that tense, but the breath was

surprisingly soothing. "The usual crap," I answered on the

exhale. "Get up, go to work, put out network fires for 9

or 10 hours, come home, eat, hit the computer and try to

write a little, go to bed. Repeat ad nauseum."

"What about the weekends?"

"Laundry, shopping, picking up the house, writing … you get

the idea."

"Wow," she remarked, pursing her lips for a moment. "And

here I thought you might not be getting out enough."

"Getting out is overrated," I countered. "I'm a solitary

creature, Carolyn – an unequivocal INTP, remember?"

"I remember. I also remember you having a social life, and

seemingly enjoying it, when you were still with Lynn."

"That was her social life, not mine. And it was a long

time ago."

"Yes, it was. Almost a year, if I remember it correctly.

It's time for you to get back out there and live your life,

Mark. This degree of isolation isn't good for you. It

shows in your body language, and it shows in your writing."

"Hey!" I protested. "I've written some damned good stuff

this year: 'Triad,' 'Thrill Ride,' 'Business Class' ...

what's wrong with those?"

"There's nothing wrong with the stories," she said, her

voice remaining smooth and even. "But how long did it take

you to write them?"

She had me there, and we both knew it. "Okay, so my

productivity is way down. But the quality is high. Maybe

I'm just getting slower because I'm getting better."

"Maybe. And maybe you're running low on inspiration, Mark.

Your best work has always come from your life experiences,

and lately you haven't been having any. That's not

healthy, and I don't just mean for your writing."

"And what's your prescription?"

Before Carolyn could answer, the doorbell sounded. She

rose quickly from her chair. I started to join her, but

she waved me down. "Stay. I'll be right back."

As good as her word, Carolyn returned a minute or so later

with a young woman in tow. She looked to be in her mid

twenties, with a pleasant, girl-next-door face. Long sandy

hair tied back behind her head and a pair of round wire-

rimmed glasses gave her a studious look to go with the

oversized satchel she carried on one shoulder. She wore

faded jeans, good running shoes, and a camel-colored

parachute jacket. "Brooke, meet Wiseguy," Carolyn said

while I stood up to face them. "Wiseguy, this is Brooke

Jenson."

Brooke took my hand and shook it. "I'm really happy to

meet you," she said, with absolute sincerity.

I looked into her eyes -- sparkly gray eyes with little

bits of blue and green in them -- and forgot how to speak

for a moment. "Thanks," I finally stammered lamely. "It's

a pleasure meeting you, too." The room felt suddenly about

10 degrees warmer to me.

Carolyn cleared her throat. "I don't think you'll be

needing your jacket in here, Brooke. Wiseguy, why don't

you take it for her?"

"Sure." I held the satchel while the reporter slipped off

her jacket, then exchanged the bag for it. Under the

jacket Brooke wore a plain yellow top that buttoned down

the front. It clung just enough to give a good idea of

what lay underneath: a slender physique, tight and flat in

the middle but proportionately rounded above and below. I

caught myself admiring for just a moment too long and

quickly turned to hang up the jacket. When I returned to

my seat, Carolyn was smiling knowingly at me. I began to

smell a set-up.

Brooke, meanwhile, was rummaging in her bag. She pulled

out a small tape recorder, a spiral notebook and a

mechanical pencil, then set the bag aside. "I'm glad you

agreed to the interview," she told me. "I've been a fan of

your stories for a couple of years now. I wrote to you

after 'Fan Mail' came out, but I don't expect you to

remember that."

"Afraid not," I admitted sheepishly. "But that was over

two years ago. Did I at least answer?"

"Oh, yes. I'd written to tell you how much I enjoyed the

story, and asked a question about the ending. You sent me

a very nice thank-you note, answered my question, and

suggested a couple of other author sites that I might like.

And I did."

"That's me," I quipped. "Perverting the innocent since

1999."

She smiled slyly back at me. "What makes you think I was

innocent?" All three of us laughed. Brooke had an

enchanting laugh, throaty and real, with a hint of

worldliness in it. She laughed with her whole body, too,

not just her mouth.

"Well," I suggested, seeing how her notebook was now open

to a blank page. "Is it time to break out the

thumbscrews?"

"Forgot 'em," she replied. Her eyes sparkled and she

started toying with one of the buttons on her top. "If you

seem reluctant to answer a question, I'll just undo a

button and ask again." I got to hear that delightful laugh

again, then she squeezed the Record button on her tape

recorder and set it down between us on the couch. "Let's

start with the basics: why do you write about erotic

hypnosis?"

"That's easy," I told her. "I don't -- at least, not

primarily. I write about people, usually people in love,

doing things to please each other. The hypnosis part, when

I use it at all, is just a means to that end. When people

make love, they expose and share their bodies with each

other, yes? With erotic hypnosis, they are also exposing

and sharing their minds. It's the most intimate, trusting,

thing two people can do together."

We talked writing, hypnosis, and erotica for the next hour

and some. It started out as question and answer, with

Brooke taking careful notes and the tape rolling. ("The

tape is a backup," she explained at one point. "The note-

taking is what really cements the information into my

head.") As the time went on, though, we fell into a more

conversational pattern. Brooke would toss out a question

or an observation, I'd respond to it, she'd agree or

disagree and add something on top, sometimes Carolyn would

chime in with an opinion and we'd all respond to that.

By the time we finished it had ceased to be reporter and

subject and turned into three acquaintances talking

together. And through it all, I was aware of Brooke's full

attention on every word I said. It was incredibly

flattering, sitting there, thinking out loud, while an

attractive lady paid rapt attention and took it all down as

if it was really worth remembering.

I found myself studying Brooke as we talked. Admiring the

curve of her throat into her shoulders; enjoying the

sparkle behind the glasses every time she looked at me;

relishing the soft energy in her voice. She was clearly

very interested in the subject herself, not just completing

an assignment. Okay, I admit it: I was smitten.

Carolyn sat and watched us, injecting the occasional

comment, looking insufferably pleased with herself. I

wondered what exactly she had up her sleeve.

Finally, the notebook closed and the tape recorder went

back into the bag, a 90-minute cassette now nearly full.

"I want to thank you again for this," Brooke told me.

"It's been the most entertaining interview I've ever done,

and I'm sure it's going to add something special to the

piece."

"Not so fast," Carolyn interrupted as Brooke started to

rise from the couch. "What other research have you done

for this article, Brooke?"

Brooke's nose wrinkled as she thought. "I've talked to

you, of course, Dr. Fields. And another hypnotherapist, a

Dr. Ellis -- he's more of a mainstream guy, he doesn't do

anything with erotic hypnosis. I've done chatroom

interviews with a couple of web site owners and people

who've either been hypnotized for sex or who do the

hypnotizing."

"That's all second-hand," Carolyn pointed out. "Haven't

you done any empirical research?"

"Empirical research?"

"Experience, my dear," Carolyn explained. "Before you

write about hypnosis, you should try being hypnotized

yourself. Or hypnotize your boyfriend and have some fun

with him. Have you tried that?"

"I don't have a boyfriend," she answered. "Dr. Ellis

offered to hypnotize me, but there wasn't time and I never

did make a follow-up appointment. But I'm not sure it's

really that important. You don't have to be a pilot to

write about flying."

"No, but it helps if you've at least been on an airplane

before." Brooke didn't argue, so Carolyn pressed on. "Why

don't you stay a little longer and we'll try a simple

demonstration? I think you'll enjoy the experience, and it

will give you a whole new perspective from which to write."

Brooke looked to me, as if for guidance. "You can trust

her," I said simply. "I do."

"I feel like a character in one of his stories," she said

to Carolyn. Then she turned her eyes back to me, the

lenses of her glasses making the irises seem a little

larger than they really were. "What's going to happen if I

agree to this?"

I shrugged. "Nothing that you aren't willing to let

happen."

"Of course." Brooke shifted a little on the couch and

turned to Carolyn. "Okay, why not?"

Carolyn's face took on a satisfied smile. "Excellent. Why

don't you take off your shoes and loosen your clothing a

little if you can?"

"I can do that. Mind if I use the bathroom first, too?"

"Please do. Wiseguy can show you the way. You do

remember, don't you?"

I grinned. "Barely. This way, Brooke." I offered the

reporter my hand and led her through a second door in the

office, which led to an adjoining bedroom that Carolyn used

for her couples' sessions. "Right through there," I said,

indicating the attached bathroom.



Carolyn had dimmed the lights and put on some white noise

when I returned. "You're plotting something," I accused.

"What?"

"You'll have to stay to find out," she replied, letting me

see the anticipatory gleam in her eye.

"That's Brooke's call. I'm not sure I'd want someone like

me around the first time I got hypnotized."

"But I do," Brooke said, coming back in from the bedroom

area. "I want a witness I can cross-examine later if I

want to. Besides," she added with a wink, "after reading

so many of your stories, I feel as though I've had a good

look at the inside of your mind; the least I can do is

offer you a peek at mine."

I wasn't going to argue with that -- I'd been willing to

leave her alone with Carolyn, but it would have been a

major letdown for me. Instead, I fluffed pillows while

Brooke settled herself back on to the victim couch.

Carolyn reached under the end table and produced a large

item in a black velvet hood, which she set on the coffee

table in front of Brooke.

The girl wriggled once more, settling into a comfortable

position in a nest of pillows that supported her whole

body. "Ready," she said.

Carolyn pulled the hood off the shape on the coffee table,

revealing a small shining globe on a turnstile base. The

eight-inch ball was faceted and had a mirrored finish that

reflected light in all directions. She flipped a switch on

the base and the ball began to rotate slowly on a hidden

axis.

Brooke laughed. "A hypnotic disco ball? This has to be a

joke."

"Not at all," Carolyn assured her, returning to her seat in

the armchair. "You'll be amazed at how effective a tool

this is in helping you to focus your attention. It's

surprisingly relaxing to look at, don't you think? All

those tiny facets, twinkling and turning, tend to grab your

eyes and take them along for the ride, don't they?"

As she was speaking, Carolyn slipped quite naturally and

easily into her hypnotic voice: a smoother, softer, very

soothing version of her normal voice. That familiar tone

struck a chord or two in my own mind, and I found myself

relaxing automatically as I watched and listened.

"It's so easy," she continued, "to go into hypnosis. So

very easy. All you have to do is watch and relax ... feel

your attention focusing on the ball, watching it swirl and

spin, taking you deeper and deeper into yourself. Notice

how your breathing slows as you concentrate even more

completely on the ball. You take a nice, slow, deep

breath, holding it just a little longer than usual, and now

as you let it out, you feel your entire body sinking just a

little bit deeper into the couch. A little deeper with

each breath. Deeper and deeper."

Brooke's body sat totally still, her eyes fixed on the

rotating ball. I saw the beginnings of a vacant stare

through the prism of her lenses, and I knew Carolyn would

have an easy time of it.

"Even now," she intoned, "you are starting to become of

aware of how very heavy and sleepy your body has become

while you stare at the swirling, sparkling ball. You may

not have noticed it yet, but your eyes are becoming very

tired, very heavy and drowsy, and they begin to blink more

often. That's okay -- you can let them blink as often as

they please. As often as they need to. That need to

blink, and the growing reluctance to open again after each

blink, is just your body sinking inevitably into hypnosis.

You're already there, Brooke, already in hypnosis ... you

can let go now and let your body experience it, let your

mind experience total relaxation. Each blink lasts longer

than the one before. Each breath takes you deeper inside

yourself. Down, deeper and deeper. Soon your eyes will be

so tired and so heavy that they will blink and just stay

closed. Soon, Brooke. You can feel it happening, and it

feels so good to just let it happen. Let it happen."

When I go to a hypnosis show, my favorite part is always

the induction. Even in a public setting and at a distance,

watching someone -- particularly an attractive woman --

slowly, inevitably, sinking into trance always puts a rise

in my Levis. In the intimacy of Carolyn's office, watching

Brooke's face as she succumbed to Carolyn's induction was

indescribably erotic. Her eyes fluttered heavily, fighting

the need to close, until there was no more will to fight.

They closed, and her head slumped down slightly, causing

the glasses to slide down her nose a little bit. As I

watched that I felt my own head bob, and realized with a

mild start that I was half under Carolyn's spell myself.

Carolyn kept going, taking Brooke through a couple of

standard deepeners, until the girl's body looked as if

she'd been poured onto the couch. I watched and listened,

vaguely aware of a raging hard-on, wondering what my friend

had in mind for the demonstration.

I didn't have long to wait. "Now, Brooke," Carolyn

intoned, "you are in a very deep, very satisfying hypnotic

state. You can let your mind float in this state for as

long as you wish, enjoying the sensations of being so

completely relaxed, so completely open to my suggestions.

You will always want to follow my suggestions, Brooke,

because all of my suggestions are designed to bring you

pleasure. If I ever give you a suggestion that you truly

object to, you will simply say 'No, thank you' and that

suggestion will fade from your mind without affecting you

at all. Also, I want you to remember that all of my

suggestions will be cancelled and no longer effective when

you leave my home, even if I haven't explicitly said so in

the suggestion itself.

"Now that you've experienced this deep state of hypnosis,

you'll naturally want to return to it again and again. In

fact, every time you hear me say the words 'off the record'

today you will immediately stop whatever you are doing and

return to this wonderful, happy, deep state of relaxation.

You won't think about it -- your conscience mind won't even

realize that you've heard the words -- but whenever I say

'off the record' you will instantly return to the state you

are in now, ready to receive and follow my suggestions.

"In a few moments, I am going to count to three. As I

count, you will feel yourself rising out of your trance,

returning to your normal waking state. At the count of

three, you will be fully awake and alert, feeling refreshed

and completely normal. However, when you wake up, you will

find that Wiseguy and I have become invisible. All of your

other senses will act normally, but Wiseguy and I will be

completely invisible to you. Any objects we pick up or

move will appear to be floating or moving themselves, just

like in a movie.

"I'll begin counting now. One ... beginning to wake up ...

two ... feeling the heaviness leaving your body and energy

returning to it ... three ... eyes open, wide awake."

Brooke's eyes opened slowly and her head rose off of her

chest. "Did I --" She stopped in mid sentence and looked

around the room, confused. Carolyn and I watched in

silence as Brooke pulled herself back into an upright

position and looked again. "Hello?" she called out. "Dr.

Fields? Wiseguy?"

"We're right here," Carolyn said, rising from her chair.

Brooke stared wide-eyed at the seat of the now-empty chair,

apparently looking right through Carolyn's body. "Where?"

"She's right in front of you," I said, getting into the

game. "Don't you see?"

Our victim's head snapped in my direction and continued the

incredulous stare. "Wiseguy? Where are you?"

"I don't think we need this anymore," Carolyn remarked,

picking up the disco ball and turning off the motor.

Brooke turned back toward the voice and gasped, her eyes

bugging out as she watched the disco ball appear to float

off the coffee table and back to its spot next to the

couch. "How did you do that?"

"Like this," I answered. I waited for Brooke to pivot back

toward me, then tossed a pillow at her.

"You're both invisible!" she cried, catching the pillow.

"But that's impossible. It has to be impossible."

"Of course it is," I said. "Completely impossible. Right,

Carolyn?"

"Completely," she confirmed, returning to her seat.

Brooke's head swiveled back and forth, trying in vain to

find something to look at. Finally she addressed herself

to the armchair. "But how?"

"I'll tell you," Carolyn promised, "but you have to promise

me that this is strictly off the record."

On hearing the magic words, Brooke slumped back in her seat

and went limp. Carolyn encouraged her to go deeper, relax

more, making sure she went all the way back to her deepest

state.

"Very good, Brooke," she commended, a satisfied smile on

her face. "You are such a good, obedient subject. Now

we're going to try an erotic suggestion. I want you to

search your memory for me. Think back to a time when you

had an especially strong, powerful orgasm. Try to remember

the best, most satisfying, most intense orgasm you've ever

had, and when you can remember that experience I want you

to say 'ready' to me. Start now."

I watched silently as Brooke's chest moved slowly up and

down. After a minute or two, her lips moved. "Ready."

"Good. In a few moments I'm going to count to three again,

just like before, and you will once again return to your

full waking state. Wiseguy and I will no longer be

invisible; we'll be right here, fully visible in our normal

condition, just as we were before you were hypnotized.

Once you are fully awake, your body will take the memory of

that exceptionally strong, most satisfying orgasm ever and

replay it, the way a tape recorder replays sound. You will

feel every sensation that you felt when you had the orgasm,

every touch and kiss and caress, right up to the point

where the orgasm ended, but two things will be different:

it will be twice as pleasurable, twice as intense, as when

you originally felt it, and it will be a continuous orgasm

instead of just a single one. You will keep experiencing

orgasms, one right after another, and each one will be

stronger and more intense than the one before. You will

realize after the second orgasm that the cycle will

continue until you remove both your shirt and your jeans.

Once both your shirt and your jeans are removed, you will

have one final orgasm that will be twice as intense and

pleasurable as the one before it, and lasts twice as long

as the others, and then the sensations will stop. You will

then return to your normal physical state, fully awake, and

the suggestion will be finished.

"One ... beginning to wake up ... two ... feeling the

heaviness leaving your body and energy returning to it ...

three ... eyes open, wide awake."

Once again, Brooke opened her eyes and slowly sat up.

"There you are," she said, looking from Carolyn to me.

"That was ... oh!" Suddenly her mouth fell open and her

eyes widened behind the lenses. She looked sharply down

into her own lap, then back to me. "Oh, my!"

Her breathing grew heavy, and her body seemed to relax back

into the couch. "It feels like ... unh! ... somebody's ...

oooh! ... giving ... me ..." Her words fell off into

moans, and her body started gyrating on its own, moved by

unseen forces. Brooke gave up trying to speak and lay

back, letting the sensations take over.

It was very exciting to watch. I took in every detail

while Brooke panted and moaned next to me, her body

heaving, legs open wide. She had a very brief lucid period

after the first one -- just enough time to look at Carolyn

and say, "Wow." Then the replay started again and Brooke

lost herself in it just as before, moaning uncontrollably.

"Okay," Brooke panted as the second wave subsided. "I get

the point. You can stop ... now ... ahhhh! ... Oooohhh!!"

Carolyn grinned sheepishly at me as Brooke became

incoherent once again. I shrugged, returning the grin, and

watched the continuation of the show. Brooke writhed and

wriggled on the couch, but this time her hands were working

desperately at the buttons on her yellow top. As Carolyn

had instructed, she knew now what to do to complete the

suggestion. It must have been difficult for her to undo

all the little buttons while her body was in full orgasm,

but she managed it. In the aftermath of her third climax,

she yanked at the last couple of buttons and flung the top

at me. "There!" she grunted with a huge sigh.

Carolyn and I just watched, smiling with our secret

knowledge. Brooke eyed me quizzically for a second, then

her face changed to surprise and chagrin as a fourth climax

hit. Her mouth moved, but whatever she wanted to say

turned into a long, impassioned groan as she fell back

against the pillows again.

She was starting to sweat, I noticed as I watched the rise

and fall of her chest. She was wearing a simple white bra,

the seamless kind that doesn't show under clingy tops. Her

fingers worked hurriedly at the buttons on her jeans and

got them loose enough to show a flash of white panty by the

time the storm passed. Brooke gave me an exhausted,

pleading look, put her feet in my lap, and managed two

words: "Help, please."

I grabbed her jeans at the cuffs and pulled, and she

managed to wriggle out of them without losing her panties.

She had just enough time to say "Thank you" before the

grand finale hit. I held on to her legs, mostly to avoid

getting accidentally kicked, and admired the way her

muscles moved while she rode out the last climax. Her

scent and her touch and her passion had me painfully close

to the edge myself.

Carolyn sat back and watched us both, looking thoroughly

pleased with her handiwork. After a while Brooke was

breathing normally again; she lifted her head and peered

over at me through the tops of her glasses, then withdrew

her legs and swung back around to a more-or-less sitting

position. Another quick breath or two, and she pushed her

glasses back into place and sat up, holding her panties by

the waistband to keep them from sliding off. She looked

back over at me, smiled gratefully, and said, "Thanks."

I shrugged, started to say, "My pleasure," but thought

better of it -- given the circumstances, it just wouldn't

have come out well at all.

Carolyn leaned forward in her chair to address us both.

"Shall we continue?"

Brooke was incredulous. "You mean there's more? I'm not

sure I can take it -- I'm almost out of clothing as it is."

There was that Cheshire cat grin again. "Trust me,"

Carolyn assured her, "you'll enjoy this part. But it's

strictly off the record."

Once again, Brooke did a fast fade and slumped back into

the couch like a dishrag. Carolyn saw that as well as I

did, but despite the good reaction she lowered her voice

and went into another deepening speech. Her words flowed

smoothly and easily, and I found myself responding to them

even as I watched for their effects on Brooke. I

remembered those words from earlier sessions, when it was

me going so deep for her.

Time passed. Through a light fog, I became aware that the

deepener had ended and Carolyn was giving suggestions

again. " ... and this time when I count to three, Brooke,

you will open your eyes and sit up, acting as if you were

fully awake, but remaining deep in hypnosis as you are now.

When your eyes open next, you will no longer be a reporter

researching an article; instead, you will be a character in

an erotic story, a beautiful and irresistible hypno-domme,

and your deepest desire will be to hypnotize Wiseguy.

You'll find it so easy to hypnotize Wiseguy; he will have

no choice but to fall deeply into hypnosis and to obey your

every command. You will hypnotize him deeply, then lead

him into the bedroom and use him for your mutual pleasure,

just as if you were both characters in one of his stories.

One ... two ... three."

For the third time, I watched Brooke open her eyes and

slowly sit up. Her head turned slowly in my direction.

Her eyes sparkled and her lips formed a predatory smile;

she stood up slowly and deliberately, her eyes never

leaving my face. "That's right, Wiseguy," she said, her

voice falling into the same smooth, low tone that Carolyn

had been using. "Look right into my eyes. Deep into my

eyes. Don't move or speak or nod your head or make any

sound unless I ask you to. I know that you can hear me,

just as you know that you can hear and understand me. If

you keep looking into my eyes and listening to my voice,

nothing can keep you from entering a very deep, pleasant

state of hypnosis in just a few seconds."

The frames of Brooke's glasses became the limits of my

world, the fences that held me captive within their bounds.

I sensed her leaning over me, letting me fall into her

eyes. "Your eyes are locked onto mine now; you can't look

away, even if you want to. In a moment I'm going to tell

you to try and look away, and you'll find that you can't.

Go ahead now and try, try to look away from my eyes. Try

to look at my breasts; they're so close to you now, but you

can't see them because you can't look away from my eyes."

I tried -- I really did try -- but, as Brooke had

suggested, I couldn't make myself look away. "And now

you've tried to look away, and you know that you can't, so

stop trying. It's okay to stop trying now, and just give

in. I'm going to count down from five to one now, and as I

do you will find your eyelids growing heavy, droopy,

drowsy, and sleepy. With each count they will grow heavier

and heavier, more and more tired, wanting more and more to

just close and obey, until I reach the count of one. When

I reach one your eyes will close and stay closed, too heavy

and sleepy to even think of opening them, and you will go

deep into hypnosis for me. Five ... eyes so sleepy

already, eyelids so heavy ... four ... blinking so

heavily, so hard to keep them open ... three ... two ...

almost impossible now, impossible to stay awake, your eyes

feeling as though heavy, heavy weights were pulling them

shut ... closing completely now as I count to one. Sleep

now. Deep asleep, deeper and deeper ..."

My eyes grew heavy and slammed shut on command, as if we'd

done this a hundred times before. Brooke kept talking, but

the words became fuzzy and far away as I slid helplessly

into trance. I floated that way for a while, barely aware

of the buzzing of female voices, barely aware that I even

had a body. I watched, as if from a vantage point

somewhere deep in my own head, as my body opened its eyes,

stood up, and allowed Brooke to lead it by the hand into

the bedroom.

Brooke spoke again, and the fog lifted partially. I became

aware that I was naked, although I didn't remember

undressing, and that we were standing together next to the

bed. Brooke was my Mistress, and it was vitally important

that I please my Mistress. She turned her back to me and

waited while I carefully moved her hair aside and opened

the two little hooks at the back of her bra. I kissed her

shoulder as I slid the straps down her arms, letting the

bra fall to the floor. My arms went around her and my

hands found her breasts, each one fitting neatly into a

palm. I kneaded them lovingly, teasing the erect nipples

with my thumbs, while I tantalized her with tiny kisses

along the side of her neck. It pleased and aroused me to

hear her moan softly and relax against me.

She turned again to face me, placed a hand behind my head,

and started a long, soft kiss. I felt my lips melting into

hers, our tongues meeting and teasing each other, and my

need to please her redoubled. My hands wandered down her

back and slipped inside her panties to caress her backside,

pulling her in closer, letting her feel the iron of my cock

pressing against her. Her lips left mine, kissed their way

up my cheek toward my ear, and whispered a command: "Take

them off."

I dropped to my knees and peeled the damp fabric down her

legs, letting the scent of her arousal wrap itself around

my brain, inflaming me all the more. My nose led me to the

source of the scent and I buried my face in her thin,

trimmed thatch, kissing her mound, burrowing deeper. She

moved back and sat on the bed, spreading her legs to allow

me access. I adored her with my tongue and my lips,

kissing and caressing and gently nibbling at her folds,

luxuriating in her taste and texture. The sound of her

moaning and the increasing pressure of her thighs around my

head spurred me on. Then my mistress spoke, and I found a

new, more powerful motivation: everything I did to her

body, every kiss and lick and stroke, I felt on myself

also, as if she were doing the same thing to me. I ran my

tongue up and down her fold and felt a loving tongue

running up and down my fuselage; I sucked gently on her nub

and felt the same electrifying contact on the head of my

achingly hard cock. I continued, relishing each touch,

feeling the growing, aching need to come, but knowing

somehow that I wouldn't, couldn't, until Mistress gave the

command.

Brooke's body began to gyrate, and I recognized both the

sounds and the rhythm of her movement from when I was

holding her on the couch: she was coming, with an

intensity that caused her to fall backward onto the bed and

forget everything except the sensations I was causing. I

felt her climax in my own body, waves of pleasure that ran

from my groin like the rings caused by a stone thrown into

a pond -- all the pleasure and excitement of a real orgasm,

but without the physical release.

I kept at my task even as Brooke writhed in pleasure, happy

to keep on adoring her until I received other instructions.

Those instructions came in the form of strong hands

gripping my head and pulling me upward. My face was coated

in her juices, which mingled with her other tastes as I

kissed my way up to her face once more. Her hands let go

of my head and found the steel-like shaft between my legs.

There was a tearing sound, and then the unmistakable feel

of latex rolling over my member. My hips moved on their

own, trying to fuck her hands as they made sure the condom

was seated, then followed as she guided my piston into her

center.

Every nerve ending in my body sang out as we locked

together. Her legs clamped around my bottom and pulled me

in tightly while her hips tilted to receive as much length

as I could give her. Even through the condom I could feel

the slight bump inside her that marked the sweet spot; I

clenched my muscles to press that spot.

My efforts were well rewarded by Brooke's ecstatic cries.

"Oh ... yes! ... yes!! ... COME ... NOW!!!" At her

command, the dam burst and I felt the hot rush of my seed

flowing into the end of the condom. Every muscle in my

body clenched and released together, time after time, while

my cock jerked and fired. I looked down into Brooke's

face; our eyes met, and in that moment of shared orgasm I

felt that our spirits were joined as intimately as our

bodies. Then she said something, my body became suddenly

heavy and tired, and the world slipped away.



It was weirdly disorienting waking up on my back, in a

strange bed, naked, with an equally naked woman nestled

against me. It took a few moments for my brain to engage

and remind me of how I'd gotten that way. She was already

tucked inside my arm; I hugged her gently, kissed the top

of her head, and let my hand idly caress her side.

Brooke stirred under my touch, rose up to one elbow, and

brought her lips to mind for a long kiss. "Welcome back,"

she said softly, her face hovering above mine. "Did you

have a nice nap?"

She was mostly lying on top of me, so I put both arms

around her and stroked the smooth skin of her back. "Very.

Any time I can wake up like this, I'm happy. You?"

She kissed me again before answering. "Very nice. This is

the first time I've ever done this -- gone to bed with

someone I'd just met, I mean. But I feel so comfortable

with you. It's as if I already knew you through your

stories, so we're not really strangers."

"Maybe so. One thing I've learned from artie is that

writers can't help but embed a piece of ourselves in

everything we write."

"I'll have to be careful with this article, then, or my

editor will know I've been getting too close to my

sources."

We kissed again, luxuriating in the feel of our bodies

against each other, until a discreet knock on the door

interrupted us. "You're welcome to stay as long as you

like," Carolyn said through the barely-open doorway, "but I

thought I should warn you that I have another appointment

at 6:30, so the outer office will not be empty much

longer."

I thanked Carolyn for the heads-up while Brooke stretched

forward and groped for her glasses, which had been hastily

tossed aside at some point. That put her breast within

easy reach of my mouth -- too easy to pass up the

opportunity for a quick taste. She laughed a little and

sat up; I cupped one hand around each breast while she put

her glasses back on to look at the clock. "Mmmmm," she

said, pressing her hands against mine. "Tempting. But we

only have twenty minutes, and I need a shower before I can

get dressed again -- I seem to have worked up a sweat,

somehow."

"Have dinner with me, then," I suggested. "It's a little

backwards from a normal date, but ..."

Brooke grinned. "Now you're talking." She climbed off of

me and headed for the bathroom, pausing only to set her

glasses on the night stand next to the clock. I gave her a

minute or two head start, then slipped in behind her and

offered to scrub her back. Somehow we managed to get

cleaned up and dried off with a little over five minutes to

spare.

We emerged from the bathroom to find our clothes collected

and laid out neatly for us. "Don't worry about the

linens," Carolyn called in from the next office while we

dressed. "The service will take care of them in the

morning."

With a little hustle, we were dressed and had the room and

office picked up before Carolyn's client arrived. "Thank

you," I told Carolyn as we hugged in the doorway. "It was

a most inspiring demonstration."

"It was meant to be," she replied with a wink. "Now go do

something fun, both of you."

Our first stop was a corner booth at a nearby Silver Diner.

At one point I became aware of Brooke studying me with an

odd look on her face. I looked the question at her, and

she chuckled. "I just realized I don't know what to call

you," she explained.

"Mark," I said, grabbing the little customer survey card

from its holder. "My real name is Mark." On the blank

side of the card I wrote my full name, address, and phone

numbers, then slid the card across to her. "Drop by any

time. Tonight, even."

Chuckling some more, she tore the card in half and wrote

her particulars on the other half. "How about if I take a

raincheck on tonight? I really do need to get started

writing this piece or it'll never get done."

"Okay. I may do a little writing tonight myself."

Her face lit up. "Am I about to be immortalized in a

story?"

I shrugged. "Possibly."

Brooke's eyebrows crinkled down a little bit. "If you're

going to do that, I may have to confess a few things

first."

She looked just the slightest bit guilty. I thought about

everything that had happened in Carolyn's office: the

conversation before the interview; how quickly Brooke had

agreed to be a guinea pig; the ease with which Carolyn was

able to induce a deep trance; Brooke's obvious willingness

to accept some very personal suggestions, and to have me

present for them.

I smiled and squeezed Brooke's hands. "Spent a fair amount

of time dissecting my personality in that first meeting,

did you?"

A bit of extra color rose to her cheeks, and she looked

down at the table. "Not dissecting, exactly. But we did

spend a lot of time talking about you: what kind of person

you are, and how that seems to come through in your

writing. How there's been this undercurrent of pain, of

loss, in a lot of it."

"So you two hatched this little plot together." It was an

accusation, but I tried to soften it as much as I could.

"It wasn't like that," she insisted. "It was mostly just

talking. She said you were having some trouble with

writer's block, and that maybe seeing a little bit of real-

life hypnosis might help you break through it. I told her

I'd think about it, and that was it until this afternoon."

"So that remark about feeling like a character in one of my

stories wasn't a signal of some kind?"

Brooke gave me a profoundly puzzled look. "What remark?"

"Right before you agreed to be hypnotized," I reminded her.

"You said, 'I feel like a character in one of his

stories'."

"I didn't say that," she maintained. "You did. That's why

I asked you what was going to happen if I agreed."

It was classic Carolyn: hypnotize Brooke, propose the plan

while she was under, and plant a posthypnotic suggestion to

say the code phrase if she was willing to go through with

it after meeting me. Then, to make her convincing, have

Brooke forget she'd been hypnotized that day. But why

leave Brooke convinced that the key remark had been made by

me? The answer formed in my mind along with the question:

so that I would know Brooke had given consent for the plan.

All I could do was shake my head and marvel at Carolyn's

ingenuity and at how well she knew her subject.

"What's funny?" Brooke asked.

"Nothing." I raised my glass of iced tea. "To Carolyn," I

offered.

Brooke clinked her glass against mine. "To Carolyn."



We parted company in the diner parking lot. I went home

whistling happy tunes, fired up the computer, and started

writing. The characters came to life for me, and the words

flowed easily from my mind. I was in the zone, and paid no

attention to the passing of time until my doorbell rang.

Seeing that it was after ten at night, I crept quietly to

the door and peeked through the peephole. A thrill ran

through me when I saw who was on the other side; I flung

the door open to greet her.

"I was getting ready to write," Brooke told me, "when it

occurred to me that maybe my perceptions of our time

together were distorted by the hypnosis."

"Really?" I prompted, closing the door behind her. "And

what should we do about that?"

She set down the overnight bag she was carrying and looked

at me earnestly. "In scientific studies, they always set

up a control -- an identical copy of the experiment, but

without the extra element they are trying to test. That

way, they see how the different factors interact without

the researchers' intervention."

I nodded in agreement. "So you were thinking that we

should duplicate the same set of factors as this afternoon,

but without either of us being hypnotized, and compare the

results?"

"Exactly," she agreed, closing the space between us for a

hot, lengthy kiss. "My research just wouldn't be complete

otherwise."

So I carried her to the bedroom, where we continued our

research.

-wg

1/9/02